Release Your Imagination!

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by Jacquie Nichols

The clouds are gathering, dark gray masses obstructing the moonlight. The days are dwindling to only scant hours of natural light. The year approaches its close and the breezes begin to bite at your skin, demanding coverage. The answer, some may say, is to cuddle up in your fluffiest jammies, draw the curtains against the cold, and binge watch your favorite shows on Netflix till the weather breaks and the sun shines again. I say, that’s for the obedient folks who live complacent lives only to repeat the next day the same as the last. Now, for those who are willing, I propose a challenge. Forget the monotony of the so-called normal life, drag yourself away from the plastic lives of reality stars and embrace the unknown. Reach out and grab hold of it until you can claim it as your own. Take a class that will forever change you into the person you will become, the person that has gained more knowledge than the one on the couch and revels in the wonder of what may come next.

Learn how to write the stories that celebrate the darkness. Release your imagination and run the streets with the zombies, unravel the mystery of the specter in the basement, destroy the serial killer at the circus—or let him triumph and kill them all! The possibilities abound, it’s all up to you. Do you watch the same plot twists replay with different faces all winter, or do you learn the secrets behind building suspense on the page and making your reader cringe while gripping your story in their fists, pleading for it to end but unable to put it down? You tell me, has the couch already begun to mold to your backside? If you’re ready to deny your furniture the warmth of your flesh, click the link below:

 

Frightening Bursts of Creativity with Jacquie Nichols

 

If horror isn’t your bag, that’s not a problem. We have options here for all. If non-fiction is your preference, check out a class on travel writing:

 

Crafting Your Hood: Travel Writing From Your Own Backyard with Julie Graham

 

Or document your everyday with:

 

Mommie Brain: Document Your Parenting Journey with Rachel Schinderman

 

Maybe it’s poetry that’s coursing through your veins, searching for an escape. If so, try this one on for size:

 

The Phases of Military Deployment and the Poetry Within with John Holt

 

And if none of those tickle your fancy, yet you still want to expand your knowledge and heighten your craft, this one may just fit the bill:

 

How to Make Your Novel More Cinematic for the Reader with John Reedburg

 

Come on! Click one! I dare ya!

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3 Simple DON’Ts when Querying Agents

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by Lilly Barels

I’ve heard the odds of getting a literary agent are like winning the lottery. Or being struck by lightning. But I’m here to say it can be done. With a lot of work and dedication, it is possible. (Side note: The day my agent called to offer representation is an experience I wouldn’t trade for any winning ticket.)

The purpose of a well-written query letter is to interest an agent so much that she requests your manuscript for review. Consider a query to be the 30 seconds you get in a round of speed dating: Introduce yourself, pitch the manuscript, and be respectful. A query letter is your single chance at impressing the agent so much that she loses sleep over waiting for your manuscript.

If you read examples of successful query letters, they all have a few traits in common. A query showcases the writer’s knowledge of the types of projects the agent represents. It also describes the writer’s manuscript in a succinct and intriguing way. Finally, the letter describes the writer in a brief, relevant bio.

Now, just like speed dating, there are definite No-No’s when it comes to writing a successful query letter. Consider the following don’ts before you begin drafting:

  1. Sending an unfinished manuscript: Do not query until you’ve drafted, revised, and reworked your manuscript to be the very best version of itself possible. Many think they should start the query process while they’re completing the manuscript because finding the right agent can often take a long time. However, this is misguided. Querying a partial manuscript is a mistake because the agent assumes you’ve completed the project. So when she requests it, the agent expects to receive the full manuscript in a timely manner—not in six months when you finally finish.
  2.  Groveling: Please do not beg, brown-nose, or suck up. An agent expects you to be confident, courteous, and professional. The query is your opportunity to display your skill as a writer as well as the type of client you’ll be when you’re signed. I’ve heard of aspiring writers sending flowers and boxes of chocolates to potential agents. Spend the extra time on drafting an impressive letter because you’re a skilled writer, not because you have extra money to spend on gifts.
  3. Sharing TMI: Be specific and concise with your bio. Leave out anything that doesn’t directly apply to the manuscript or your writing career.  Do not make up publishing credits.  Do not discuss your dog.  Keep it relevant and to the point. Another mistake aspiring authors make is including information in the bio that has nothing to do with the legitimacy of being a writer. Provide a list of publishing credits and writing awards. The literary agent doesn’t need to know about accolades not associated with your writing career, unless you can creatively tie them in with the reason for writing the proposed manuscript.

For more advice, tips, and resources, check out Lilly’s upcoming class:

Art of the Query Letter: How to Woo an Agent from the Slush Pile

So, you wrote a book and now it’s waiting to be on bookshelves. If you aren’t planning to self-publish and the owner of Penguin Random House isn’t your cousin, then you probably need a literary agent. Join me for this 2-week crash course that’ll get you down and dirty with the elusive query letter. We’ll use real examples that worked–including mine! And create a plan of action for taking your query into the world of literary agent slush piles. 
(P.S. if you aren’t sure what the heck a slush pile is, I’ll be sure to explain that too).

More about Lilly Barels:

 A decade after receiving her BS in neuroscience from UCLA and being named Valedictorian, Lilly decided to pursue her true passion for writing and received her MFA from Antioch University Los Angeles in 2014. She resides on Oahu as a full-time mother of two sandy children and a part-time writer of three novels. Lilly enjoys being an active member of the SCBWI and incorporates avocado into every possible meal. She is represented by Sarah LaPolla of Bradford Literary Agency. Connect with Lilly on Twitter @lillybarels

“Mom!!You WROTE About Me??” Question of Boundaries and Ethics for Mothers Writing

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by Rachel Schinderman

I had a writing teacher who once said, “Write as if your parents are dead.” The meaning was not to censor yourself and to write freely despite thinking your parents may see it, which could be embarrassing. Others have said, “if you didn’t want to be written about you should have been nicer.” As a writer who has written extensively about motherhood, and therefore my children, I think about this differently. Now, I won’t imagine my children not being here, but I must take them into account. And being “nicer” isn’t really appropriate for someone going through what is often called the terrible twos or are referred to a as threenager.  In fact it is developmentally appropriate for them to not be nicer. Or at least that is what the parenting books tell me.

There is very little I could say about myself that I would censor. I am pretty much an open book (hence being a memoir writer), but by writing about motherhood I am writing about my children and this can be sticky.

When my children were babies, I had a newspaper column where I explored our day to day lives and challenges. My son could not give me permission to write about him, obviously.  Those columns were not just about sleep challenges (they were there and then some) or ear infections (had those too), but were more about our daily struggles in the aftermath of a birth trauma where my son almost died the day he was born. To me, this very personal and intimate tale was mine to tell. This was my story of how motherhood was unfolding in a different manner than I expected. But did my son have any say in this? Did his brother when he arrived four years later premature and we added another layer of challenges?

And so I stopped my column. To be honest it was mostly that I was overwhelmed with parenting, not for any privacy or ethics concerns, but even without the column I found that I still wrote about motherhood and my children. I needed to. And so I told our stories in shows like Expressing Motherhood.

Writing for me is an outlet.  A way to explore what is going on my life, in the world.  It guides and focuses me.  Ona Gritz explores this idea beautifully in her New York Times piece “Finding Myself on the Page.” But is it fair for me to share my story when it involves someone else, especially when that someone else is the person I am supposed to protect above all else?  Now that he is older, 11, my son has asked me not to publish certain stories ones he may find too revealing and I have listened and done as he asked. But now that he is older, he also revels in the celebrity aspect of being written about. He thinks he is famous if he can find his name in a Google search.  I haven’t the heart to tell him mommy isn’t that well known and therefore anything I write won’t make him famous.  He will have to do that on his own.  And he is up for that challenge.

I explored this issue in my column, “Debating the Benefits of Sharing Our Kids” and revealed that I was written about as a child.  My mother, Eileen Douglas, wrote a children’s book called Rachel and the Upside Down Heart, about our lives after my father died when I was only four.  What I discovered in writing that column is what I hope my sons will also discover, that I felt great value in having someone write down my story.  It elevated what was happening to us.  It made me feel like it, and therefore I, mattered.  And what could be more motherly than helping your children find value in their stories?

As I wrote in my column:

But I found strength in writing. And I found strength in having this document, this book that my mother created. I had beautiful illustrations depicting my childhood. I had words that captured a specific, though difficult time in my life. This was a time I may otherwise have shut away never to have remembered.

So now as I look for ways to remember these early years with my child, in addition to taking numerous photos and videos, I write.

In doing so, we as mother/writers must also be aware of our children, and write not as if our parents are dead but as if our children will read it one day.

Rachel Zients Schinderman is a writer, teacher, and mother living in Los Angeles. As a teacher, she is the creator of the writing groups for moms, Mommie Brain  (www.mommiebrain.com), which was featured in Daily Candy.  As a writer she has had her work appear in the Los Angeles Jewish Journal, The Nervous Breakdown, The Manifest Station, The LA Times Magazine to name a few and had an ongoing column about parenting in The Santa Monica Daily Press also called Mommie Brain. As a mom she has two sons, ages 7 and 11. Learn more at rachelschinderman.journoportfolio.com or http://www.mommiebrain.com to read some of her work. She is also a regular performer in the hit show Expressing Motherhood and has placed twice in LA Parent’s Moms Who Write Contest.  She has a Masters in Professional Writing from The University of Southern California and a Teaching Certificate from Antioch University, but more than all of that, she is excited by other people’s stories and helping them discover them.  

 

Rachel’s class, Mommie Brain: Documenting Your Parenting Journey provides real tools for writing on motherhood. Begins on Monday, October 30th

Personal Essays: Good for the Soul and Good for the Writer

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by Andrea Tate

When I was a kid, my family made fun of me because I had a journal at my bedside. It wasn’t your typical youth journal, no bright colors, and no lock and key— just a simple spiral notebook. It was open for anyone to see. I had nothing to hide in this journal. My journal was a list of what I needed to do that day—a way for me to empty out all the details that were running around in my head. The first thing on the list was “Wake Up!” which my mother found hysterical. “Won’t you already be awake when you read #1?” She was right, but I didn’t care, it was part of my process.

My bedside list was a system in which I could makes sense of my thoughts, a way to work through things.  A personal essay has the same function. It helps the writer assimilate the machinations of their mind. In G. Lynn’s book Writing and Being, he talks about personal writing and how it  “is essential to finding our own voice in a society that is always calling us away from ourselves, always telling us the answers are out there somewhere.” As creative writers, many of the answers must be found inside us. Writing personal essays assist all genres of writers. Whether you are writing in fiction, poetry, screenplays, or young adult, personal essays will help you hone in on your creative ideas. Fiction writers can increase their visibility and platform by having essays on a topic related, or unrelated to their current novel. A published personal essay is the perfect addition to an author’s media campaign. 

Personal writing is good for clearing your monkey mind, coming to terms with a stressful situation, or creating essays worthy of publication. Personal essays are like a teacher’s chalkboard. Ideas are written on it, comprehended, and then erased for the next lesson. Writing a personal essay can be a self-lesson. Studies have shown that writing your thoughts and feelings produce beneficial mental health results because it helps to calm the mind.

Even if you aren’t a nonfiction writer, writing a personal essay on an idea you are tackling in your novel, poem, or dialogue can help you sort out the minutiae. Personal essays are not only a genre, but they are a clearing house for the mind. If you feel stuck and don’t know what to write about, perhaps just use the prompt, “What’s bugging me today?” You might surprise yourself with the first draft of your next essay, or at the very least you’ll get that Trump rant off of your chest.

If you would like to investigate more about the personal essay, check out Andrea’s online class the begins Sept. 11th: Learn from the Best: Redefining the Personal Essay with Andrea Tate

And click below to see one of Andrea’s personal essays on the Huffington Post:

http://www.huffingtonpost.com/andrea-tate/older-bride_b_9283170.html

Andrea Tate is an adjunct writing professor at Antioch University, Santa Barbara. Her essays have appeared in the Huffington Post, Role/Reboot, A Daily Dose of Lit, and Bleed. Andrea’s story “You” was published in the anthology Extract(s) in 2014, and is part of a memoir currently in progress. Andrea is an award-winning theatre director and an advocate for theatre arts in early education. She teaches acting and nonfiction writing workshops for Hillcrest Center for the Arts in Thousand Oaks. Andrea received her MFA in Creative Nonfiction from Antioch University Los Angeles.

 

 

7 Reasons You Should Never Stop Writing

 

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by Nathan Elias

Writing is such a mysterious thing. Some people marvel at the task and enjoy its fruits (like books, movies, or music) while others take on the task of trying to create the things that people love. If you’re someone who has started on the writing path, be warned: it can be daunting. But don’t let the winding road deter you—it is a trip worth taking. Here are seven reasons you should never stop writing:

  1. Developing The Habit

Pick up any book about the craft of writing and somewhere the author will advise committing a specific amount of time to writing per day, per week—whatever works for you. Here are some examples:

  • “The first thing you have to know about writing is that it is something you must do every day—every morning or every night, whatever time it is that you have.” –Walter Mosley (This Year You Write Your Novel, p.7)
  • “You try to sit down at approximately the same time every day. This is how you train your unconscious to kick in for you creatively.” –Anne Lamott (Bird by Bird, p.6)
  • “…in order to achieve mastery [writers] must read widely and deeply and must write not just carefully but continually, thoughtfully assessing and reassessing what [they] write, because practice for the writer as for the concert pianist, is the heart of the matter.” –John Gardner, (The Art of Fiction, p.9)
  • “…successful writers attest that unless they prepare the conscious mind with the habit of work, the gift does not come. Writing is mind-farming. You have to plow, plant, weed, and hope for growing weather.” –Janet Burroway & Elizabeth Stuckey-French (Writing Fiction, p.13)
  • “You just have to sit in the chair,” –Donald Ray Pollock, paraphrased in conversation.

No matter how you look at it, one reason you should never stop writing is the knowledge that if you’re serious about it, you have to commit.

  1. Self-Discovery (and Discovery of the Other)

Fiction, poetry, creative non-fiction, screenwriting, journaling—any genre of writing requires a writer to either look into the Self or observe Others (people, places, or things). When learning the fundamentals of writing, even on the most basic levels, a writer begins to see aspects of the world in different ways. Trying to write about characters and bring them to life on the page, a writer might use aspects from their own lives, people they know, or lives they’ve learned about. In attempting to understand ourselves and others truly, self-worth and empathy can help strengthen a writer’s identity as a person.

  1. Literature is a Continuum

So you’ve committed to writing habitually and using writing as a form of discovery—now you’re wondering if your writing is worth it. Doubt starts to creep in, maybe you think your writing is an embarrassment to yourself. It is important to remember that most writers write terrible first drafts, and put relentless hours into perfecting the work we love them for. You might pour your heart into a novel for over a year only to hear back from an agent that it “just isn’t hitting the mark.” Do not fret—if you’ve committed to the writing life, who knows what writing boundaries you might transcend in the years to come? You may rediscover yourself and your book at a time when literary trends are different. Literature is always evolving but is also cyclical—trends usually are “the same but different.”

  1. “You’re not a writer unless you write”

Life gets in the way. It’s a fact. Not everyone can commit to writing every day, as the “masters of the craft” have advised. From family, to school, or work, writing is often a passion that slowly becomes a meager hobby over time. The struggle is to find a way, no matter what, to wedge in some writing time. Get something, anything, on paper. If you only have a few minutes during a lunch break to scribble a few sentences, then that’s what it takes. Keep a project in mind, as small as a poem or as big as a feature-length screenplay. Keep a notebook or a document open on your computer, and get the words down as soon as possible. Not everyone can afford to sit for an extended period of time—but what makes a person a writer is simply getting the words down.

  1. “I write to Save Someone’s Life, Probably My Own” – Clarice Lispector

Stories need to be told, and we all have them. If you’ve ever toiled over a friend or loved one’s real life issues, you probably know the feeling of helplessness. Writing for other people can help us come to terms with parts of life that we cannot control, or even see things from a new perspective. Maybe there is a secret in your own life, or something in your history that won’t stay buried. Writing, like time, can heal some emotional wounds and, like daily vitamins, can be antidotal.

  1. The task is never finished

Like any art, it can be a scary thing to release your work out into the world. How do you know when your story, poem, or book is finished? How does a painter know when a portrait is finished? A song can always be re-recorded or remastered, and books can be rereleased. So where is the line drawn? You could have written a swell book, signed with an agent who is excited about your project, and still wait for years before publication. So you have to keep writing. Think of the next thing and begin again until it is time to revisit old work, if that opportunity arises.

  1. Writing is a healthy meditative practice

Whether it is journaling, composing poetry, or any other type of mindful writing—the act of conjuring language into meaning can be a cathartic experience for anyone. From writing about trauma to simple observations about the world, the process of making sense of one’s thoughts can serve as a form of release—a profound letting go of the past, or embracing the present. The act of sitting down to write can be like meditation: focused breaths, clear thoughts, and concentrated energy help stabilize the mind and soul, especially if done in controlled periods of time. And like walking meditation, or hyper-awareness through the day-to-day activities, writing can also become a mental activity carried on by the subconscious.

The amount of reasons to write or be a writer are plentiful—they don’t end here. There is no one way to be a writer, but one area anyone can agree is that a writer is someone who writes. Hopefully this list can help you stay inspired and committed on the path.

Nathan Elias is the program assistant for inspiration2publication, and the author of A Myriad of Roads that Lead to Here (Scarlet Leaf Publishing House, August 2017). His work has appeared in Literary Orphans, Hobart, The Blotter, Red Fez, Eclectica Magazine, Birdville Magazine and elsewhere. In 2015 his short film The Chest premiered at Cannes Film Festival. He has served as genre editor for the literary journal Lunch Ticket, and is working on an MFA in Creative Writing at Antioch University Los Angeles. 

 

 

The Resistance Poem, Not Just Now, but Always

originalby Xochitl-Julisa Bermejo

Those who have chosen to answer the call to write activist poetry before the fall of 2016 are familiar with the naysayers of the elite poetry world. Especially those poets who chose to venture into MFA programs to write this type of activist, political, witness, cultural representation poetry. They did so while enduring endless articles, words from mentors, and books that warned against the dangers of writing political poetry for its seemingly fleeting topics and didactic over lyric sensibilities. But now that the political climate is what it is, suddenly many of those naysayers are scrambling to find ways to write and teach political poetry because as has been the call on social media and beyond, “Now more than ever, we must resist!”

But for those poets who pursued poetry from the beginning as a call to action and resistance, it is because the poetry is their truth, because their truth helps them exist in a world that wants to destroy them, and because resisting has always been a form of survival. These poets have been long at work studying histories, recording stories, invoking the names of the past, and they are not surprised by what has become of our country. Heartbroken, yes, but not surprised. These poets have always known today was possible because they have never stopped fighting for their own existence, and though they are tired, they will be keep fighting and keep writing.

It is as Pinoy poet, Carlos Bulosan, wrote in his memoir, America is in the Heart, about the moment he discovered he could write poems: “Then I knew surely that I had become a new man. I could fight the world now with my mind, not merely with my hands. My weapon could not be taken away from me any more. I had an even chance to survive the brutalities around me.”

But why poetry and what is the connection between politics and poetry? Like many (not all) politicians, the poet has the gift of language and the ability to use language to envision a new future for an audience. Politicians can choose to use this gift to bolster support for programs they wish to champion like John F. Kennedy did in his speech for the space program. But too often the politician uses this gift to inflict fear in citizens in order to pass or uphold unjust laws, maintain power, or gain support for an international war such as George W. Bush did after 9/11 with his “weapons of mass destruction.”\

And so it’s often the poet that is tasked with battling political abstractions and rhetoric with lyricism, symbolism, and personal stories of witness.

What we are seeing today is not new. There is a long list of poets from around the world and throughout history who have endured threats of imprisonment, exile, and even death in order to speak out against unjust governments, to right a wrong, and fight for the survival of their people.

Here are four poems that have supported important movements in the US and beyond with reflections from contemporary activist poets that I admire. This is in no way an extensive list of political poems.

 

ID Card by Mahmoud Darwish

 

Write it down!

I am an Arab.

I am a name with no honorific.

Patient in a land

Where everything lives in bursting rage

My roots were planted before time was born

Before history began

Before the cypress and the olive trees

Before grass sprouted

My father is from the plough clan

Not from the noble class

My grandfather was a peasant farmer

Had no pedigree

Taught me the pride of the sun

Before teaching me to read

A shack to guard groves is my home,

Made of branches and reeds

Are you pleased with my status?
“Palestinian poet Mahmoud Darwish was the voice of an entire country of people who lost their voice when their land fell under occupation by the newly established Israeli military government in 1948. Darwish’s ID Card, written in 1964, stokes a blazing fire that still rages on today. His repeated exhortations of ‘Write it down, I am an Arab,’ spits in the face of political leaders who demanded all Arab people living in Israel be registered and all travel be monitored. This poem echoes loudly today here in the United States in a surreal time where the sitting President has threatened the Muslim population repeatedly. Whether it’s a registry, a travel ban, or monitoring locations where Muslim people gather like mosques and other community centers, Darwish’s poem reminds me that I am an Arab, that I am a Muslim, and I have a duty to express myself and the experience of my people.”

– Ramy Eletreby, a contributing author to Salaam, Love: American Muslim Men on Love, Sex and Intimacy

 

Yo Soy Joaquin by Rodolfo Corky Gonzales

 

The thundering hoof beats are my horses. The chattering machine guns
are death to all of me:
Yaqui
Tarahumara
Chamala
Zapotec
Mestizo
Español.
I have been the bloody revolution,
The victor,
The vanquished.
I have killed
And been killed.
I am the despots Díaz
And Huerta
And the apostle of democracy,
Francisco Madero.

 

 

“Yo Soy Joaquin is where a lot of us began. It’s the crack and rumble that precedes the tectonic shift toward Chicanx consciousness. In the Google age, I am Joaquin is an Intro to Chicanx Studies class in eight center-justified pages. You could tumble down the interweb rabbit hole looking up each reference, each name, and place throughout the piece or just marvel at the decolonized gymnastics the mouth is forced to perform when articulating words like Tonantzin, Tarahumara, and Chichimeca. Without question, Corky, like Homer, gave Chicano letters our first great epic.”

Joseph Rios, author of Shadowboxing: Poems and Impersonations is the book forthcoming in October 2017 from Omnidawn

 

I, Too by Langston Hughes

 

Tomorrow,

I’ll be at the table

When company comes.

Nobody’ll dare

Say to me,

“Eat in the kitchen,”

Then.

 

Besides,

They’ll see how beautiful I am

And be ashamed—

 
“The longing in I, Too always talks to me. The inclusion the speaker opens and closes with is longing that sees into the future of this country, hoping for a better place than the present for all “darker brother[s].” In my own work this is vital, because like I, Too, my work seeks to heal without being disparate. Like I, Too, my work longs for learning and self-empowerment, uplifting and leaving no one behind. And the redemptive shine in the second to last stanza—the reason all poets pine over Langston’s work.”

F. Douglas Brown, 2013 Cave Canem Poetry Prize recipient for Zero to Three (University of Georgia 2014) and co-author of Begotten (Upper Rubber Boot Books 2016) with poet Geffrey Davis.

 

Puerto Rican Obituary by Pedro Pietri

 

Here lies Juan

Here lies Miguel

Here lies Milagros

Here lies Olga

Here lies Manuel

who died yesterday today

and will die again tomorrow

Always broke

Always owing

Never knowing

that they are beautiful people

Never knowing

The geography of their complexion

 

“I was lucky to have a faculty member at my high school invite Pietri to perform at my school a few years before his death in 2004. At the time, I had no real sense of Puerto Rican literature and had no idea that there had been a vibrant Nuyorican poetry scene in the 1970s. Pietri’s performance was my introduction to that movement. He was irreverent, hilarious, and political. I was already confident enough to code-switch among friends and family without any self-consciousness, but I had never experienced that aesthetic as art. I was deeply moved and went up to Pietri and introduced myself. He handed me a copy of his book Puerto Rican Obituary. You can imagine my surprise and delight a year later when I was assigned to read the title poem of his collection for my first ever Latino literature course at Yale. In that class I learned that he had recited “Puerto Rican Obituary” at a Young Lords meeting in 1969, making it the poem of the movement. The poem itself rails against a capitalism, racism, a Catholicism that depends on blind faith, self-hate, in-fighting among Puerto Ricans, and various other maladies that keep Puerto Ricans in New York struggling. The hopeful ending imagines an alternate space where Spanglish is the norm, where Negrito means love, where there is, in essence, the possibility of community, hope, acceptance, and love.”

Li Yun Alvarado, author of Words or Water

Xochitl’s class, Writing Poetry for Social Change starts Monday, March 3rd and there are a few spots left!

Xochitl-Julisa Bermejo is the 2013 Poets & Writers California Writers Exchange poetry winner and a 2015 Barbara Deming Fund grantee. She has work published in American Poetry Review, crazyhorse, CALYX, and Acentos Review among others. A short dramatization of her poem “Our Lady of the Water Gallons,” directed by Chicano activist and Hollywood director, Jesús Salvador Treviño can be viewed atlatinopia.com. She curates the quarterly reading series HITCHED and co-founded Women Who Submit. Her debut poetry collection, Built with Safe Spaces, is forthcoming from Sundress Publications.

 

 

 

 

Submission as Practice

Stack of magazines

If you want to be published, you have to submit your work.

This may seem like perfect logic, but you’d be surprised how many writers don’t get it. I didn’t get it. When I was in my creative writing program, I saw my classmates around me getting published and I was proud of them, a little bit jealous and a little indignant.

Then I realized (facepalm) I wasn’t submitting my work anywhere. It wasn’t ready, I thought. I wasn’t there yet. I was caught up in a cycle of uncertainty and inaction.

But one Saturday morning I sucked it up. I had a short story I had gone through several drafts on, had workshopped, one my mentor deemed was ready for the world.

But where to look first? I started with journals I’d seen friends published in, or journals I’d picked up around at literary events. I finally settled on a few I liked the name of and pressed send. When the rejections started rolling in, I actually was pretty stoked. It meant the inaction and fear had stopped. I’d learned long ago that rejection from any publication isn’t personal. Editors have a vision for each journal and sometimes your story, poem or essay just doesn’t fit. Sometimes it’s too similar to another story they recently ran. Sometimes they just don’t get you. The right match is out there, you just need to keep submitting.

Every Saturday after that, I’d submit something three more places. It took 62 rejections before I placed my first story. Then, by the time I’d hit 260 submissions, I had four pieces published. In seeing these numbers, I realized that it would take a lot of rejections to get my stuff published places. I’ve had stories published after 32 rejections. But it was the practice of submitting them that got them into the hands of the right editors, and only with dogged persistence could I hit those numbers.

Finding new journals was a guessing game. I subscribed to two at a time to get to know them better, but my repertoire was pretty small. Fortunately, technology caught up with me with Duotrope, a fantastic glass bottom boat of all of the literary journals out there with helpful filters and links to all of the journals. I could tell within a few reads whether or not the journal would like my stuff and my acceptance numbers got better as I was able to find the right flavor of journal for my work more quickly.

But I fell out of practice submitting. I got distracted by a novel. I kept writing short stories, and they would go onto my desktop where they would sit. I had forgotten the numbers game and had lost all persistence and I fell into a three year dry spell. Fortunately, I found Women Who Submit. My friends and fellow Antioch Alums Xochitl Julisa Bermejo and Dr. Ashaki M. Jackson started the group with Alyss Dixon in answer to the VIDA count. In an effort to close the tremendous gender gap in journal publications and the confidence gap in the number of women submitting, they created a group that meets once a month, encourages each other and submits together. In meeting with them, I found myself back in the practice of submitting and after a three year dry spell, I have gotten four stories picked up in as many months!

I also started my SUBMIT class on inspiration2publication. Sometimes we need a little nudge and I knew that if I committed to talking about submission with a group of writers, we evaluated strategies from where they should submit and I was able to teach them techniques for locating the best journals and magazines, I would stay in practice. If you sign up for SUBMIT, I will help you create a strategy for submitting your poetry, fiction or non fiction, how to find which journals would best suit it and best, how to get into a practice of submitting. You will also submit five places before leaving the class and you will be doing it in good company.

The best thing about this class is that every time I teach it, I get notices a few weeks later from students whose work has been accepted!

Kate’s class, SUBMIT! begins April 3

Kate Maruyama’s novel HARROWGATE was published by 47North. Her short work has appeared in Arcadia, Stoneboat, Whistling Shade and on Salon, Duende, and The Rumpus among other journals as well as in two anthologies: Winter Horror Days and Phantasma: Stories. She teaches in the BA and MFA programs for Antioch University Los Angeles as well as for Writing Workshops Los Angeles and the inspiration2publication program. She writes, teaches, cooks and eats in Los Angeles where she lives with her family.